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Post by account_disabled on Dec 12, 2017 5:07:50 GMT -5
Hi, I'm not sure it will work how I imagine it will but let's try it out. Each person writes a paragraph. Not a paragraph length story just a paragraph (4-6 sentences) telling part of a story and we will get to critique each other's paragraph (too much adjectives, too little discriptions, bad word choices etc.) I'll go first. "Bullocks!" said John as he examined the garden through his bedroom window. The briers that mapped the edges of the green labyrinth looked like eight hours of hard work and he only had four hours of free time in his day. John squinted his eyes as he looked up at the sun's persistent reverie and thought to himself, "This day belongs to the hummingbirds. I'm a night owl. I better get to work before I choose the bed again." For more details: 3D Explainer Video
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